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Star Wars Aayla Secura's Starfighter by AdamKop

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The first thing that made this design stand out for me were the wear and tear and good perspective work. The shading is also shaping up better and better.

The shape also reminds me somewhat of the A wing which is a plus since that is a good design. The small turret makes it look more heavier though so perhaps a medium fighter?

Color wise the combination of different shades of plating gives the ship also more depth something, along with the wear and tear, makes it look more realistic.

The only nitpicks I could find would be that the cockpit is not completely 'correctly' perspective drawn compared to the rest of the ship that there is no light emiting from the hud and controls.

Also the main thruster reflection is not completely right but that could be me.

By all all I would like to see what you will do next with this design after it has received additional insignia, I consider this one to be one of your most realistic looking ships thusfar in your Jedi Line.
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AdamKop Nov 8, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thanks a lot for the critique !
I must admit the cockpit bugged me a bit when I saw how I messed it up ... I have no idea how could I make an error like that :)
Reflections on the exhausts are just gloss and smudges - the line you're probably referring to is just a burn in.
I will try to fix all of the problems in the 3D model.
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HandofManos Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Only the chair stands out ;) and looking forward to the finished product.
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